Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 80 wordsI recognize an important Canadian naval heritage initiative marking the 25th anniversary of Operation Apollo and the events of September 11, 2001.1A new project mapping Canada’s naval response to 9/11 in the Middle East, HMCS Vancouver’s mission for Operation Apollo, will digitally preserve and share a critical chapter of our nation’s military history.2Supported by Veterans Affairs, this initiative is transforming historical ship logbooks into an interactive, web-based map documenting HMCS Vancouver’s 79 days in the North Arabian Sea.34Thanks · 26 wordsI would like to recognize Blue Horizon Geomatics and my constituent, Theresa Fingler, whose experience aboard HMCS Vancouver brings exceptional depth and authenticity to the project.5ThanksReasoning · 13 wordsThis initiative honours our veterans and ensures that their service is never forgotten.