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Steven MacKinnon

68 words · 3 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Christine Normandin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, the CBC must appreciate the minister’s disregard for it. For years, the Bloc Québécois has been warning the federal government that Quebec will be hit harder by European tariffs if Canada ends its carbon pricing. Well, that time has come. Even if Quebec maintains its carbon pricing, 800 million dollars’ worth of our Quebec metals will still be subject to tariffs. Thanks to Canada, we are going to face more customs barriers. Are the Liberals proud of the harm they are doing to Quebec’s exports?”
Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 32%Promise 9%Procedure 6%The ask 53%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 22 wordsQuebec’s aluminum is one of the greenest in the world.3 Our government has attracted new investments and collaborations with Canadian aluminum producers, 1Promise · 6 wordsand we are not stopping there.Partly on pointVague promise Procedure · 4 wordsTo be very clear: ProcedureThe ask · 36 wordsIf the Bloc Québécois is interested in reducing greenhouse gases, all it has to do is support the biggest greenhouse gas reduction project of all: the high-speed rail project connecting cities in Quebec to cities Ontario.2Partly on point

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