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Ruby Sahota

77 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Arpan Khanna (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, in Kelowna, a man violently chokes his wife. He is arrested. He is released on bail. Thirty minutes later, he shows up again. He assaults her again. He chokes her again. He is arrested again. Under the Liberal laws, guess what: He is released on bail again. The Liberals promised they would fix the broken bail system, but nothing has changed. Under their watch, intimate partner violence is up 40%. How many times must a woman be attacked before the Liberals put her safety first?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 100 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 88%The ask 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 68 wordsbecause we are so concerned about incidents such as this, we put forward the Protecting Victims Act in Bill C-16, 2and we put forward the bail reform legislation.3 It all passed in June.1 Those laws have been implemented starting July 15, 4but it is the job of the provinces to make sure they are applying these pieces of legislation.6 The changes have gone into effect in the code.5 The ask · 9 wordsIt is time for the provinces to catch up.

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