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Sean Fraser

112 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Frank Caputo (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals constantly boast about how they fixed bail in their eyes. We as Conservatives warned them that they did not go far enough. Recently in Kelowna, a man was accused of assaulting and choking his intimate partner. He was released on bail. Within 30 minutes, he is alleged to have been back at her house, again choking her, and now breaching a no-contact order. He was again released on bail. People expect the government to protect the most vulnerable. Will the Liberals admit that their bail changes did not go far enough, and commit to acting?”
Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 79%Reasoning 7%Promise 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 85 wordsif my hon. colleague had actually read the legislation that we put forward, he would know that, on the advice of the provincial government in British Columbia, we added specific provisions to address cases of intimate partner violence that involve strangulation, 1because we know and accept that it is predictive of future violence. When we adapt these laws, we expect provinces to put them into action by appropriately resourcing the system and those who are appointed to make decisions to put these rules into force. Reasoning · 8 wordsTragic circumstances such as these can motivate change. Claims · 4 wordsWe have taken action, Vague promisePromise · 15 wordsand we are looking forward to seeing the changes implemented by the people within positions—Partly on point

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