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Gary Anandasangaree

64 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Fred Davies (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, on the contrary, we are sitting in an immigration system that has over 30,000 people who want to come to Canada under the start-up visa program and are stuck in bureaucratic purgatory. That is not progress. That is a failure of our system. On the flip side, today’s national security strategy is a nothingburger and fails to address the serious screening problems for non-citizens seeking entry to Canada. The CBSA had 675 reports seeking deportation on national security grounds, but only 44 people were actually removed. This is a disaster, so will the Liberals reduce immigration levels—”
Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 39%Claims 23%Promise 38%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 7 wordsthis is a historic day for Canada.PositioningOff point Claims · 15 wordsWe released a national security strategy that encompasses an all-of-government approach toward strategic national security. Promise · 24 wordsWe will, in the coming weeks and months, release specific strategies toward public safety, Vague promiseas well as intelligence, defence, the economy and foreign policy. Positioning · 18 wordsThis is a once-in-a-generation opportunity for us to ensure that we have a strategic view of national security.PositioningPartly on point

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