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Leslie Church

68 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Garnett Genuis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I am very proud of the plans Conservatives have announced. Just today, we announced an exciting new idea to support families: allowing both parents to simultaneously claim the CPP child-rearing dropout. This means families who share caregiving responsibilities would no longer be penalized in the calculation of their pension eligibility. Parents should not have to choose between spending time with their kids and protecting their retirement. Will the finance minister include this constructive proposal in the upcoming budget?”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 40%Claims 60%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 23 wordsonce again, we are going to take no lessons from the Conservatives in terms of affordability for families.Off point We have been delivering it.PositioningVague promise Claims · 41 wordsWe have put in place longer parental leave options, shared parental benefits, greater support for working families and, perhaps most importantly and most historically, a Canada-wide early learning and child care program saving families over $16,000 a year in some cases, 12Positioning · 4 wordswhich the member opposes.PositioningPartly on point

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