“Mr. Speaker, in a shifting global economy, Canadians and businesses need fewer barriers and faster, more efficient government services. Our government recently introduced Bill S-7, the cutting red tape for all Canadians act. I would ask the President of the Treasury Board to explain how these measures will make life easier for Canadians and help Canadian businesses compete and grow.”
Statement grade
A
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 90 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 60%Claims 24%Procedure 7%Positioning 9%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 26 wordsto grow businesses, we need to cut red tape, reduce burdens and lower costs.The cutting red tape for all Canadians act would do just that.1Claims · 14 wordsWe are focused on maintaining strong protections for public health, safety and the environment.Procedure · 4 wordsOur goal is clear: ProcedureReasoning · 9 wordsless time on paperwork and more time to innovate.Positioning · 5 wordsWe are building Canada strong.PositioningOff pointVague promise