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John Brassard

76 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Mario Beaulieu (Bloc Québécois)
“Madam Speaker, the bill would defer many important details by delegating responsibility for these matters to the commission it seeks to create, the digital safety commission of Canada, a new federal bureaucracy. A number of contentious issues remain unaddressed in the bill, which seems to set out broad principles, delegating the details to the commission for later consideration. Does my colleague agree that all potentially contentious issues should be addressed and studied as fully as possible so that the law reflects the legislative intent and so that responsibility is not unduly delegated to officials?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 8%Positioning 47%Reasoning 37%The ask 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 6 wordsI agree with the hon. member.1Thanks Positioning · 18 wordsThere are many aspects of the bill that concern me, such as the point the hon. member raised.Positioning Reasoning · 28 wordsThat is why it is very important that, when the bill goes to committee, we have a thorough discussion on everything it contains.Vague promise Protecting children is very important, Positioning · 18 wordsbut protecting the rights and freedoms of individuals in Canada is what worries me and many other people.Positioning The ask · 6 wordsWe need to discuss that soon.Partly on point

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