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Jacob Mantle

93 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Lisa Hepfner (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, I would like to take the member opposite back to his first statement, because it kind of rubbed me the wrong way. I would like to ask him why a dad would have to be very brave to join a book club with a bunch of moms. If he is so afraid to join a book club with a bunch of moms, do we really trust him to ensure that his children are safe online?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 49%Reasoning 32%Claims 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 25 wordsI hope the member opposite is not impugning a dad who came to listen to his MP and impugning his ability to parent his children, PositioningReasoning · 9 wordsbecause I think that would be offensive to him. Claims · 17 wordsFor the record, I do not believe I said he was scared. I said he was brave, 1Positioning · 4 wordsand he was brave.Positioning Reasoning · 21 wordsHe was brave to be there to speak to his MP and tell his MP what he thought about the issue. Positioning · 17 wordsIf that is funny to the member across the way, I think she should consider her opinions.PositioningPartly on point

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