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Jacob Mantle

119 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I have raised five teenagers, and one thing I have learned is that telling a teenager they cannot do something does not necessarily mean they will not do it. Sometimes it means they will get a whole lot better at hiding it. That is what worries me about banning social media for kids under 16. Of course, we want to protect our kids, but we also have to be realistic about how teenagers behave. If they find ways around a ban or end up on platforms that are even harder for parents to monitor, have we made them any safer? I wonder if we could end up making things worse for the kids we are trying to protect. Perhaps my colleague can speak to that.”
Statement grade
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Average 94 / 100
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Procedure 19%Claims 50%The ask 14%The question 16%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 16 wordsthat is a very important question. It raises the issue of the efficacy of this proposal.Procedure Claims · 12 wordsWhat we have seen is that there are mixed reviews of efficacy. Procedure · 7 wordsIf we look at the Australia model, ProcedureClaims · 48 wordswhich the government touts, a huge number of underage children access social media anyway through VPNs or other means.1 There is also the issue of the number of users on platforms that would be regulated. There is evidence that children may migrate to smaller platforms that are unregulated. The ask · 17 wordsI think we have to consider whether the bill is achieving the reduction in harms it seeks. The question · 19 wordsOn the other hand, through the means it is choosing, is it harming people disproportionately on the other side?

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