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Luc Berthold

159 words · 12 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Madeleine Chenette (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, I commend my colleague’s speech, which neatly summarized all the issues facing parents and grandparents. His willingness to contribute to this bill is clear, and I thank him for that. With this in mind, what would encourage businesses to comply if we were to remove the financial penalties for non-compliance? Large companies have a role to play. How can we get them on board to help us get this vital bill passed?”
Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 66%Procedure 5%Reasoning 29%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 10 wordsI did not say that I fully support Bill C‑34.1Partly on point Procedure · 8 wordsI want to be very clear about that.Procedure Claims · 95 wordsAs I said, certain aspects of Bill C‑34 are noteworthy. There are provisions that we can support, but other parts concern me, particularly the broad powers being granted to the commission. The commission would be empowered to do a great number of things that are not specified in the bill and would be determined at a later date without coming back to the House.2 That is a major concern for me. I therefore cannot answer my colleague’s hypothetical question. There are a number of matters in the bill that remain undefined. That, too, is troubling. Reasoning · 46 wordsThat is why the bill must be studied in committee. We need to shed light on those undefined provisions so that we can then take a position on the matter my colleague has raised, Vague promiseas well as on several others. Quite simply, too much remains unclear.Partly on point

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