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Luc Berthold

62 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Steven Bonk (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I assume the Liberals are aiming to have some definite outcomes from this bill, but we are lacking definitions. For example, one of the main items they are discussing is online bullying, yet we still do not have an official definition of bullying. We do not even have a definition of the social media they are targeting. Could my hon. colleague mention how on earth we can measure something when we do not even know the proper definitions to measure it by?”
Statement grade
C
61 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 19%Positioning 35%Aside 13%The ask 32%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 12 wordsI am going to pick up on the expression I used earlier.Procedure Positioning · 22 wordsIs making the sound of an animal in heat bullying? It may not necessarily be so. It can give someone a fright.PositioningPartly on point Aside · 8 wordsMy Bloc Québécois colleague seemed a bit intimidated.AsideOff point The ask · 20 wordsThis is indeed a very problematic situation. We need to define what constitutes bullying before determining the penalties for bullying.Partly on point

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