Analysis · Debate reply · beta

Dominique O'Rourke

100 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Emma Harrison (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to give an opportunity to my colleague from Guelph, which is the epicentre of so much research when it comes to agriculture, to say what it means for her to be the sponsor of this bill in the House.”
Statement grade
B–
70 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 44%Positioning 56%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 22 wordsmy colleague is a beef farmer, has restored the soil on her property and is an ardent champion of agriculture in Ontario.1 Positioning · 9 wordsWe talk a lot about the importance of agriculture.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 22 wordsThere was a lot of battling over who else would be able to speak to second reading of this private member’s bill.Off point Positioning · 47 wordsI think that when we are in a centre of agricultural excellence, when we are surrounded by farmland and when we understand what this would mean to our food security and our ability to feed the world, we cannot help but be extremely passionate about the topic.Positioning

Analysed on