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Kevin Lamoureux

156 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Helena Konanz (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the response from the government side shows just how out of touch it is with rural and aging communities and with seniors. The Liberals offer more empty promises, and they refuse to answer for the unaccredited medical doctors they brought to Canada, promising them that they would be able to work. Many are from Canada, doctors sitting on the sidelines while our health care system grinds to a halt. Residents in my riding are not asking for grand lectures. They are asking for an ER clinic they can rely on and a specialist who can see them when they are sick. Too many physicians are sitting on the sidelines. Why will the government not adopt our plan to take immediate action to put them into hospitals when they are needed?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
The question 22%Procedure 6%Positioning 13%Claims 32%Reasoning 11%The ask 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, The question · 35 wordshas the member actually approached the province and said, “There is a federal fund of $5 billion.1 If there is a project here, what is being done to try to access some of those dollars?” Procedure · 10 wordsI can tell the member that I have done that.Procedure Positioning · 6 wordsThe member talks about dissing seniors.Positioning Claims · 29 wordsLet us remember, we have a dental program for seniors, including seniors that are on a fixed income in the member’s own riding.2 Yet the Conservatives vote against that.3 Reasoning · 8 wordsDental care is a part of health care. The ask · 14 wordsConservative members should talk to a senior that needs to get dental work done, Reasoning · 9 wordsand they will have a better appreciation of that. Positioning · 9 wordsThe federal government understands the issue of health care.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsWe are doing what we can to support our national health care system through transfer payments and targets, investing in capital.4 Positioning · 6 wordsThe federal government is stepping up.Positioning The ask · 9 wordsThe Conservatives need to step up where they can.Partly on point

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