“Mr. Speaker, my colleague mentioned Bill C-218, which sought justice and protection for people with mental illness from the expansion of this bill. If he does not mind, I wonder if he could elaborate on what he meant by that and why the bill was necessary to protect vulnerable Canadians.”
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B+
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Average 80 / 100
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Thanks 34%Claims 40%Reasoning 26%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 50 wordsI want to thank the hon. member for sharing a very personal and passionate story about his personal experience with a close friend of his who he had to unfortunately say goodbye to.It is something that touched him profoundly and he shared it with us here in the House.ThanksClaims · 33 wordsMental illness is a big subject.It encompasses a whole bunch of different people who have mental illness for a whole variety of reasons, and there is a process to get through that.Off pointReasoning · 38 wordsTo give them the option of MAID at a time when they are at the lowest in their lives, when they feel there is no future for them, whether it is health-related or otherwise, makes absolutely no sense.Claims · 25 wordsExcluding it from the legislation through the legislation my colleague put forward in the House was mandatory and needed.1Unfortunately, the government voted against it.2