Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 31%Thanks 43%Claims 26%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 49 wordspublic service is not an easy path.It means putting one’s name forward, opening oneself up to scrutiny, and devoting countless hours to improving the lives of others.Those who choose to serve do so because they care deeply about their community and the people who call it home.Thanks · 34 wordsToday, I want to congratulate the newly elected members of Whitby town council, 2and the mayor-elect, Elizabeth Roy, on her re-election.1I am very excited to continue our work together to help Whitby thrive.ThanksClaims · 41 wordsAs Whitby continues to grow, Mayor Roy and council will play an important role in helping our community seize new opportunities, while preserving the quality of life that makes Whitby such a great place to live, work and raise a family.Thanks · 34 wordsI also want to thank every candidate who stepped forward in the election.Regardless of the outcome, Whitby is stronger because of their willingness to serve.I thank them for their commitment to Whitby.Thanks