Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 28%Claims 24%Reasoning 32%Thanks 15%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 13 wordsI recently had the pleasure of visiting the skilled trades fair in Gatineau, 1AnecdoteClaims · 16 wordswhere I was able to see the rich, diverse range of trades taught in our region.Anecdote · 28 wordsHaving been a trades instructor myself, I know how important it is to pass on know-how and give young people the skills they need to build their future.AnecdoteClaims · 9 wordsVocational training is more than just an educational path.Reasoning · 15 wordsIt is a driver of economic development and prosperity for our regions and for Canada.Claims · 10 wordsOur businesses and industries need skilled, competent and passionate workers.Reasoning · 18 wordsBuilding Canada strong also means recognizing the value of skilled trades and investing in those who practise them.Thanks · 22 wordsToday, I would like to tip my hat to the teachers, training centres and students who are helping to shape our future, ThanksReasoning · 14 wordsbecause Canada’s strength lies first and foremost in the talent and expertise of Canadians.