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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 62 words30 years ago, Milt Reimer began sewing snowmobile gear in his basement in Morris, Manitoba.1This fall, the company he founded, FXR Racing, will surpass $1 billion in lifetime sales.2Milt knew the sport.A motocross racer and former powersports dealer, he saw what others had missed.Riders needed clothing that was lighter, better fitting and built to perform in the cold, Reasoning · 8 wordsso he set out to make it himself.Claims · 59 wordsStill headquartered in Oak Bluff, Manitoba, FXR is Canada’s leading powersports apparel brand, the category leader in snowmobile gear, 3and one of North America’s top motocross brands.4Its products are sold in more than 60 countries through more than 1,000 dealers.5FXR employs more than 135 Canadians and supports more than 9,000 athletes from grassroots racers to world champions.6Reasoning · 23 wordsThe first billion dollars took 30 years and represents three decades of dedication, ingenuity and passion for Milt and the entire FXR team.7Positioning · 7 wordsThis is Manitoba entrepreneurship at its finest.PositioningThanks · 13 wordsOn behalf of the House, I congratulate Milt Reimer and everyone at FXR.ThanksPositioning · 5 wordsManitoba is proud of them.Positioning