Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Steeve Lavoie

173 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

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Greeting 11%Claims 45%Positioning 28%Thanks 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 19 wordsI want to take a moment today to pay tribute to two outstanding people, my mother and my father.Greeting Claims · 12 wordsTogether, they raised seven children and welcomed 24 grandchildren and 18 great-grandchildren. Positioning · 11 wordsThey worked hard their whole lives on our family dairy farm, PositioningClaims · 13 wordswhile also taking care of many acres of woodlot and a maple grove. Positioning · 27 wordsDespite all the work they had to do, they still always found time to get involved in their community. My mother was a true pioneer for women.Positioning Claims · 52 wordsShe served for over 26 years on the board of directors of an insurance company in the 1980s and 1990s, where she was the only woman. Meanwhile, my father spent over 20 years of his life serving as a municipal councillor. They had seven children, a dairy farm and a maple grove, Positioning · 11 wordsand they still found time to get involved in their community.Positioning Thanks · 28 wordsThank you Mom and Dad for your sacrifices and love. Most of all, thank you for helping me to become the man I am today. I love you.Thanks

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