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Yasir Naqvi

69 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Yves Perron (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, we stand in solidarity with Parks Canada workers. According to the union, it is no longer 500 positions, as the government claimed last week, but 742 positions that will be cut. These are good regional jobs, including in La Mauricie National Park. All of this is being done to save $145 million, even as the Prime Minister gave away $150 million in free park passes for his Canada strong agenda since taking office. Does his idea of a strong Canada involve firing over 700 people to cover his own spending?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 41%Reasoning 20%Promise 16%Claims 23%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 28 wordswe thank our federal public servants for their dedication, and we deeply appreciate the critical role they play in ensuring our safety and protecting Canadians and our environment.Thanks Reasoning · 14 wordsWe must continue to protect nature and the environment while strengthening Canada’s emergency preparedness.Partly on pointNo reason givenVague promise Promise · 11 wordsWhile we are streamlining expenditures, those priorities will not be compromised.Vague promise Claims · 16 wordsAll the changes we are making are aimed at strengthening the system that Canadians rely on.Vague promise

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