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Yasir Naqvi

74 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Marilène Gill (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, the job cuts at Parks Canada will transform our protected areas. Imagine no longer having park wardens in the Mingan Archipelago. The closest ones will be 650 kilometres away. No one will be there to protect nature or stop poaching. Our hearts go out to the workers who are devastated by this news. They deserve transparency and time, not the Prime Minister’s bulldozer. The government needs to stop taking this penny-wise and pound-foolish approach, just to save a few bucks on the backs of these folks. Will he stop this injustice?”
Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 39%Promise 61%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 9 wordsParks Canada is going through a process of modernization.1 Promise · 30 wordsWe are making sure that the services provided by Parks Canada are available for all Canadians.Vague promise That is why we will continue to make sure that Parks Canada remains viable.Vague promise Claims · 20 wordsIt is an important part of our institution. It is something that, all across the country, we get to enjoy. Promise · 15 wordsWe will make sure that Parks Canada remains a source of pride for all Canadians.Partly on pointVague promise

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