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Scott Reid

101 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
B+
80 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 9%Positioning 35%Claims 49%The question 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsKingston’s new mayor had this to say about Alto: ProcedurePositioning · 27 words“I question the wisdom of spending enormous amounts of money creating a...high-speed system while the...rail network we already have has been allowed to deteriorate.” She is right.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 49 wordsThe PBO estimates that extending Alto to Kingston would add between $4 billion and $6 billion to the cost of this already bloated project.1 The extra mileage, plus the extra stop, would add 20 minutes to every Montreal-to-Toronto trip on this supposedly fast train.2 Kingston does not want Alto.3 Positioning · 8 wordsThe rest of us do not want Alto.Positioning The question · 8 wordsWhy do we not just cancel Alto altogether?

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