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Mike Kelloway

78 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Scott Reid (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Kingston’s new mayor had this to say about Alto: “I question the wisdom of spending enormous amounts of money creating a...high-speed system while the...rail network we already have has been allowed to deteriorate.” She is right. The PBO estimates that extending Alto to Kingston would add between $4 billion and $6 billion to the cost of this already bloated project. The extra mileage, plus the extra stop, would add 20 minutes to every Montreal-to-Toronto trip on this supposedly fast train. Kingston does not want Alto. The rest of us do not want Alto. Why do we not just cancel Alto altogether?”
Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 17%Claims 62%Positioning 12%The ask 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsit has been said time and again, ProcedureClaims · 11 wordsbecause it is true, that this project is generational and transformative.Unearned certainty Procedure · 6 wordsLet us talk about the numbers: ProcedureClaims · 37 wordsboosting the GDP by up to $35 billion and creating 52,000 jobs.2 This is not to mention that the environmental footprint is much lower with trains. It is also connecting rural, connecting urban and creating community wealth.1 Positioning · 9 wordsThat is what we are about on this side.Positioning The ask · 8 wordsWe would like the Conservatives to join us.Off point

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