“Mr. Speaker, Kingston’s new mayor had this to say about Alto: “I question the wisdom of spending enormous amounts of money creating a...high-speed system while the...rail network we already have has been allowed to deteriorate.” She is right. The PBO estimates that extending Alto to Kingston would add between $4 billion and $6 billion to the cost of this already bloated project. The extra mileage, plus the extra stop, would add 20 minutes to every Montreal-to-Toronto trip on this supposedly fast train. Kingston does not want Alto. The rest of us do not want Alto. Why do we not just cancel Alto altogether?”
Statement grade
B
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Average 78 / 100
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Procedure 17%Claims 62%Positioning 12%The ask 10%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsit has been said time and again, ProcedureClaims · 11 wordsbecause it is true, that this project is generational and transformative.Unearned certaintyProcedure · 6 wordsLet us talk about the numbers: ProcedureClaims · 37 wordsboosting the GDP by up to $35 billion and creating 52,000 jobs.2This is not to mention that the environmental footprint is much lower with trains.It is also connecting rural, connecting urban and creating community wealth.1Positioning · 9 wordsThat is what we are about on this side.PositioningThe ask · 8 wordsWe would like the Conservatives to join us.Off point