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Michael Barrett

909 words · 45 sentences · 58 clauses

Statement grade
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85 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 1%Positioning 30%Reasoning 11%Claims 33%The ask 7%Procedure 10%The question 4%Promise 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 8 wordsI will be sharing my time this afternoon.Greeting Positioning · 98 wordsBill C-41 is a profound and deeply personal issue, I think, to everyone who will consider it, and everyone who has intervened on it today approaches it from different life experiences, different backgrounds and different beliefs. Today, I am approaching this from my perspective as a Roman Catholic. I am guided by my faith and my belief in the inherent dignity and value of human life from conception to natural death. The dignity that every person has is not diminished by suffering or by illness. Their dignity is not diminished by disability or by their dependence on others.Positioning Reasoning · 11 wordsIt is through that understanding of dignity that I approach this, Positioning · 116 wordsand my concern for the compassion and care of others. I recognize that the serious suffering, which is probably unimaginable to any of us, that leads some people to consider MAID is at the heart of why this issue was ever brought to the attention of legislators. Those who support MAID may do so out of compassion and respect for the individual autonomy of those who are suffering. Certainly, suffering is not something we should seek, celebrate or ignore. I think we have a responsibility to relieve suffering where we can, Vague promisebut suffering, again, does not diminish the dignity of a person who is experiencing it, and it does not make their life any less valuable.Positioning Claims · 47 wordsIn this legislation, the provision of MAID for mental illness as the sole underlying medical condition has been excluded.1 With the difficulty in determining the irremediability of a psychological condition, that is a positive change. I am certainly supportive of that exclusion being included in this legislation. The ask · 31 wordsWe need to make sure that there is access to treatment for people who are suffering with mental illness.Vague promise We also need to make sure they have timely access to treatment. Claims · 91 wordsIn recent years, we have heard about veterans who have approached Veterans Affairs Canada for care in response to injuries and illnesses related to their service to Canada. It is so difficult to imagine that the testimony concerning this that Canadians heard at the Standing Committee on Veterans Affairs described things that could have happened here. Veterans, in multiple cases, who were seeking that care were offered MAID instead of receiving treatment, a benefit they are entitled to by virtue of their service to Canada, 2which they offered with unlimited liability. Procedure · 15 wordsThat is a specific phrase, the “unlimited liability” that our veterans serve our country with.Procedure Reasoning · 17 wordsIt means they can be put in harm’s way, leading to their death, in service to Canada. The question · 11 wordsWhen they leave the service, what is our liability to them? Claims · 12 wordsCertainly, we owe them the care for conditions arising from their service. The question · 12 wordsHas Canada done a great job in taking care of our veterans? Claims · 4 wordsNo, it has not. The question · 9 wordsIs that problem unique to any period of time? Claims · 57 wordsNo, it is not, but it is incumbent on us now to do better, to get it right and to take care of our veterans, who served us with unlimited liability.Vague promise The testimony we heard at committee was, of course, that some of these veterans were offered MAID, not care, but death. That is hard to imagine. Procedure · 41 wordsWe will hear in some of the speeches from some of my colleagues that there are not sufficient safeguards for Canadians, for people who are suffering, for people who are considering their condition in the future and considering an advance directive.Procedure Claims · 5 wordsThere are not sufficient safeguards. The ask · 30 wordsWhat I want to raise for the government’s and the minister’s consideration is what protections there are for veterans approaching the government for care for those service-related injuries and illnesses. Positioning · 9 wordsThey should never be encouraged to end their lives.Positioning Claims · 45 wordsThere is, I think, a departmental directive that veterans affairs employees are supposed to no longer offer medical assistance in dying to our veterans.3 I think that for an issue as grave as this, the opportunity that is afforded to us in crafting the legislation, Promise · 47 wordsbecause we have to get it right, is to make sure there is independent and sufficient oversight but also legal protections, which would bring legal consequences for anyone who was to offer MAID to a veteran seeking care for an illness or injury arising from their service. Claims · 9 wordsThat is not the role of Veterans Affairs Canada. Positioning · 12 wordsThis is not an easy conversation for any of us to have.Positioning Claims · 27 wordsI think we all know someone who has spent their final days, weeks, months or, in some cases, years not just in a diminished capacity but suffering. Positioning · 39 wordsIt is a hard conversation to have. It is one that we are having, and I appreciate the need to be respectful of one another in engaging in this, Partly on pointbecause we are all coming at it from different perspectives.Positioning Reasoning · 75 wordsIn finding the balance, should this law come to pass, to make sure there are sufficient safeguards for everyone, I have highlighted, in particular, some of the safeguards that could be considered for veterans. I encourage the promotion of the dignity of all people. I think something we can agree on, in a conversation where there will be disagreement, is that we need to look out for each other, especially the most vulnerable among us. Procedure · 31 wordsIt is with that view that I have offered this intervention, and I will take questions on that. Hopefully, we can get this right if and when it moves to committee.Procedure

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