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Michael Barrett

109 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Ziad Aboultaif (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the current legislation has failed to protect Canadians with mental health and some veterans. Why does the government need to listen this time and make sure that protection is there for vulnerable Canadians?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 10%Claims 17%Positioning 31%Reasoning 30%The ask 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsI will go back to the example I offered about veterans.Procedure Claims · 13 wordsWe have seen demonstrated the failure of existing legislation to safeguard against abuses. Positioning · 23 wordsI cannot think of anyone who is more vulnerable than someone living with an operational stress injury like PTSD after serving our country.Positioning Reasoning · 15 wordsThey seek help, have the courage to call for help from the government they served, Claims · 6 wordsand then they are offered MAID.1 The ask · 12 wordsWe need to make sure there are legal protections and independent review. Reasoning · 18 wordsThis is just one of many examples of where we need to make sure there are sufficient guardrails. Positioning · 11 wordsThis is truly too important for us not to get right.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise

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