“Mr. Speaker, the current legislation has failed to protect Canadians with mental health and some veterans. Why does the government need to listen this time and make sure that protection is there for vulnerable Canadians?”
Statement grade
B+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning, Respect and Clarity is 86. The grade is held to 83, 30 above Signal.
83 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsI will go back to the example I offered about veterans.ProcedureClaims · 13 wordsWe have seen demonstrated the failure of existing legislation to safeguard against abuses.Positioning · 23 wordsI cannot think of anyone who is more vulnerable than someone living with an operational stress injury like PTSD after serving our country.PositioningReasoning · 15 wordsThey seek help, have the courage to call for help from the government they served, Claims · 6 wordsand then they are offered MAID.1The ask · 12 wordsWe need to make sure there are legal protections and independent review.Reasoning · 18 wordsThis is just one of many examples of where we need to make sure there are sufficient guardrails.Positioning · 11 wordsThis is truly too important for us not to get right.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise