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Philip Lawrence

551 words · 27 sentences · 31 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 92 / 100
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Thanks 19%Positioning 6%Reasoning 37%Claims 31%Procedure 2%The ask 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 18 wordsI want to start my speech by congratulating all members of the House for the debate so far.Thanks Positioning · 6 wordsI have been here observing it.Positioning Thanks · 27 wordsI thought the member for Winnipeg North had an excellent question about hospice. The Bloc Québécois members talked about a very difficult subject in a sensitive manner.Thanks Positioning · 14 wordsI am not sure if Canadians are always proud of us in the House, PositioningReasoning · 23 wordsbut I definitely think they could be this afternoon and morning with this important debate. This debate is quite frankly overdue and necessary. Thanks · 34 wordsLike I said, I commend members in the House again for the compassionate way in which we have been able to have a dialogue, with many members I am sure having many different opinions.Thanks Reasoning · 41 wordsIn addition to Bill C-41 and the content in it, a general discussion about MAID is important, regardless of where, I might add, someone is on the issue and whether they are an advocate or believe there should be additional safeguards. Claims · 49 wordsCanada is about to hit the highest rate of medically assisted dying in the developed world. In 2024, we were number two in the world, next to the Netherlands.1 We were at about 5.1% of total deaths.2 I do not believe we have a national number yet for 2025, Procedure · 12 wordsand if someone wants to interject, I am happy to take it, ProcedureClaims · 52 wordsbut for Ontario in 2025, the rate was 7.3%.3 We are creeping up to about 10% of total deaths being done by medical assistance in dying. I do not believe this was a number that was projected or that we thought would occur at the time that the legislation was initially passed. Positioning · 13 wordsNumbers do not always tell the whole story. In fact, they rarely do, PositioningReasoning · 10 wordsbut data points can point us in the right direction. The ask · 31 wordsRegardless of where someone is on the issue, I think we need to have a discussion, especially as MAID creeps up closer and closer to 10% of total deaths in Canada. Claims · 40 wordsOn to the substance of the legislation, one of the more troubling elements that has occurred since 2019, when I was first elected, is the potential inclusion of mental illness as the sole reason for accessing medical assistance in dying.4 Reasoning · 26 wordsThis is challenging not because mental illness is not as real as a physical illness. It very much is. In fact, I would say 100% is.Unearned certainty Claims · 28 wordsThe challenge is that with some mental illnesses, it is very difficult, according to the experts and the practitioners, to fully understand the impacts of certain mental illnesses. Reasoning · 103 wordsWhat we would never, ever want to see is that there was a permanent solution to a temporary problem. I think most people in here, regardless of the suffering if in fact it was for a finite amount of time, would want to be there in supporting people to get through to the other side of that. If it is possible to get to a point where someone can once again enjoy living and the suffering is no longer overwhelming, I am sure the vast majority of Canadians would want to see the community and health practitioners helping a person get through it. Thanks · 24 wordsOnce again, I would like to commend the House on a thoughtful dialogue. I thank the House for allowing me to contribute to it.Thanks

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