Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Yves Perron

162 words · 7 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 19%Claims 40%Positioning 20%Thanks 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 31 wordsas the 52nd edition of National Volunteer Week draws to a close, it is with pride and gratitude that I wish to highlight the commitment of those who give so generously.1Greeting Claims · 58 wordsHelping a neighbour, supporting an elderly person, delivering a meal, providing transportation to a medical appointment, cooking, providing assistance, supporting, loving: That is what volunteering is all about. Without these guardian angels, countless people would be isolated, a huge number of young people would have no one to rely on, and many amateur sports would cease to exist. Positioning · 21 wordsBeing a volunteer means finding fulfilment through selfless giving; it means spreading smiles; it means sowing and reaping moments of happiness.Positioning Claims · 7 wordsA great many organizations rely on volunteers, Thanks · 24 wordsand I would particularly like to pay tribute to the volunteer centres that coordinate these generous efforts in D’Autray, Maskinongé, Matawini and throughout Quebec.Thanks Positioning · 12 wordsVolunteers are the light that shines at the heart of our communities.Positioning Thanks · 9 wordsI want to thank them for their daily dedication.Thanks

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