Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Sherry Romanado

116 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
C–
Average 58 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 15%Claims 40%Thanks 13%Positioning 33%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordsI rise to share some news that is great for Canada and for the Canadian Armed Forces.Greeting Claims · 46 wordsWe confirmed this week that Canadian Armed Forces recruitment has reached its highest level in 30 years.1 The number of applications has more than doubled over the past year, reaching over 45,000.2 On top of that, we have recruited 7,310 regular force members, surpassing our target.3 Thanks · 15 wordsOur soldiers, sailors and aviators do important and incredible work. We need more of them.Thanks Positioning · 38 wordsThe Canadian Armed Forces’ continued recruiting success signals much more than progress. It reflects a renewed strength at the core of our military. Our government is proud to reinvest in our forces to rearm them and rebuild them.PositioningVague promise

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