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David Bexte

75 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Mario Beaulieu (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, it seems that the bill would result in the government no longer being required to disclose the names and addresses of political donors. I asked one of my Liberal colleagues about this earlier. He replied that he did not think the bill would have that effect. If that were the case, it would really open the door to conflicts of interest, corruption and so on. If it turns out that the bill really does make it so that the government is no longer required to disclose the names and addresses of donors, would my colleague agree that that is wrong? Would he oppose that?”
Statement grade
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30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Promise 15%Reasoning 85%

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Mr. Speaker, Promise · 11 wordsthis is exactly why it needs to be studied at committee.Vague promise Reasoning · 64 wordsThe sharing of data and the unintended consequences of that, and the impacts of privacy of the individual have to be fully vetted out and compared.Vague promise It deserves sunlight, the discussion of open debate and thorough study.Vague promise Our democracy is not necessarily supposed to work fast, but it is supposed to be thorough so it can be effective and stand the test of time.Off point

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