“Mr. Speaker, this is a really important subject. One thing the member touched on, and I just wanted to ask his opinion on this further, is that we are considering changes so that during an election a financial agent could only work for one party at a time. I want to know what he thought about that. It is getting tougher to find financial agents because of the red tape and the complications. It is a really big job to volunteer for. Does the member agree that during an election a financial agent should only work for one party?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance and Clarity.
Average 74 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 16%Reasoning 77%The ask 7%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 16 wordsthis is important, and it may be one of the most important aspects of this legislation.ProcedureReasoning · 76 wordsWe need to look at how the finances are treated and get it right.Vague promiseThe power rests with the people and is enabled by the money.The adage is to always follow the money.Off pointWe need to have people knowledgeable about how to audit, conduct, measure, tabulate and ledger the expenses, and to do it with honour, discipline and honesty.However, if we have them spread out too much, then it introduces a lot of problems.The ask · 7 wordsThe bill needs to go to committee.Off point