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Garnett Genuis

155 words · 5 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Harb Gill (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, I rise today with a heavy heart following the tragic stabbing of a 16-year-old boy by a 19-year-old boy in Windsor. At the centre of this unimaginable loss are two mothers, one grieving the loss of a child, the other grappling with the reality of what her child now faces. There are two families whose lives will never be the same. Their pain is shared by friends, loved ones and a wider community that has been left shaken, wondering how something like this could happen so close to home. The most fundamental responsibilities of any government are to protect its citizens and ensure that families feel safe in their communities and secure in their daily lives, yet while Canadians are confronting tragedies like this, the government is focused on expanding committees and engaging in procedural manoeuvres that feel far removed from the realities people are facing. Is anyone on the government benches truly paying attention to these families, to those mothers or to the communities they were elected to—”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 6%Claims 54%Reasoning 19%Positioning 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 10 wordsmy heart goes out to those families in his community.Thanks Claims · 38 wordsWhen it comes to the work of the House and its committees, I would say that, in minority parliaments, such as what Canadians chose in the last election, we are forced to work together in a different way, Reasoning · 30 wordsbecause anything that moves forward at committees requires two parties, at minimum, to be able to have a meeting of the minds. That process of negotiation is not always easy, Claims · 38 wordsbut I think we have seen in the last year that things can get done and done well, especially because our party has been responsible. We have expedited legislation where appropriate and we have opposed it where necessary, Positioning · 31 wordsbut now the government is trying to eliminate the need for that co-operation and create the circumstances in which it can impose its will undemocratically on the House. It is wrong, PositioningClaims · 8 wordsand it is not what Canadians voted for.Off point

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