Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, today is indeed a very special day because just recently we had the three by-elections and today we have the largest women’s caucus in the history of Parliament. I believe just over 70 women have been elected and that is worthy of recognizing. We saw earlier today the government and opposition working together as we had an opposition private member’s bill pass through the House. It amplifies what the Prime Minister said a year ago. He wants to see Parliament work in a collaborative way. I am wondering if the member could provide her thoughts on how we continue to move forward in a collaborative way, working for the betterment of Canadians first and foremost.”
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Anecdote 64%Claims 21%Promise 14%
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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 63 wordsbeing chair of the environment committee in recent weeks, I have enjoyed how we have worked together across parties to move the work forward in our environment and sustainable development committee.1In my past life, working at the City of Halifax, it was all about working across different perspectives to get the work done and to have shared objectives to move things forward.2AnecdoteOff pointClaims · 21 wordsI am really pleased that we have had cross-party support for various private members’ bills on both sides of the House.Promise · 14 wordsI hope that we can continue to collaborate for the betterment of our country.Partly on pointVague promise