“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals are on a catastrophic collision course when it comes to fighting climate change. They are all about “drill, baby, drill”. They just approved Enbridge’s Sunrise pipeline, yet another pipeline on top of Trans Mountain, Coastal GasLink and plenty of others. It does not stop there. They even want to build another pipeline in western Canada, on top of Keystone XL. Even the Harper Conservatives did not show such contempt for the fight against climate change, and they do not even believe in climate change. Are there any environmentally conscious Liberals left? When will they take action?”
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Claims 68%Positioning 12%Promise 8%The ask 12%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 62 wordsI just got back from the G7 environment ministers’ meeting, 1where I talked to and met with people from around the world.I also spoke about climate change when I was in Berlin for the Petersberg climate dialogue.2Partly on pointFrom what I heard, Canada is seen the world over as a leader when it comes to addressing methane and developing renewable energy projects.Positioning · 11 wordsMy colleague should be proud of Canada’s place in the world.PositioningPromise · 7 wordsWe will continue to fight climate change, Vague promiseThe ask · 11 wordsand I hope that he will support us in that work.