“Mr. Speaker, it makes no difference who the Liberal Prime Minister is. It is always the same old, same old. While this government continues to rack up debt, raise costs and increase taxes, our pensioners are struggling to find decent housing. According to a poll in the weekend paper, more than half of Quebeckers aged 50 and over are afraid they will run out of money in retirement. When will the Prime Minister stop spending money on our credit card so that our seniors can make ends meet?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 58. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 6%Claims 69%Positioning 24%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 6 wordsnow we have seen it all.ProcedureClaims · 66 wordsThe Conservatives stand up in the House and claim to defend seniors, yet they lowered the retirement age to 65, 2which would have left hundreds of thousands of elderly people across the country financially vulnerable.They also opposed the 10% increase in the GIS for those aged 75 and over.1It is absolutely mind-boggling to see them stand up and earnestly claim to be defending seniors.Positioning · 23 wordsOn this side of the House, we will always defend seniors.Vague promiseWe will always fight for a strong economy that works for everyone.PositioningOff pointVague promise