Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Heather McPherson

160 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 10%Claims 30%Positioning 40%Reasoning 20%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordson National Day of Mourning, we honour those who went to work and never came home.Thanks Claims · 48 wordsEvery year, hundreds of Canadian workers are killed on the job and hundreds of thousands more are injured or become sick, left to fight for the compensation they have already earned.1 These workers are parents, daughters, sons and neighbours. They are the people who keep our country running, Positioning · 51 wordsand right now, their lives are worth less to the government than a balance sheet. Labour protections are being gutted while unions are being undermined and workers who speak up are being pushed out.Hidden agency New Democrats have always stood with workers. We come from workers. We are the party of workers.Positioning Reasoning · 32 wordsOn this Day of Mourning, we know that mourning without action is not enough. The greatest tribute we can pay to the fallen is to make sure that the living are protected, Positioning · 13 wordsso today, we mourn the dead and fight like hell for the living.Positioning

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