Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jake Sawatzky

192 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
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Procedure 17%Positioning 19%Greeting 4%Claims 51%Promise 9%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 32 wordstoday I rise to mark one year since I was first elected as one of the youngest members of Parliament, born in the 21st century, to serve the people of New Westminster—Burnaby—Maillardville.12Procedure Positioning · 15 wordsThis has been a year of collaboration, listening, learning and showing up for my community, PositioningGreeting · 8 wordsand it is an honour of a lifetime.Greeting Claims · 72 wordsIn my riding, I have had the privilege of working closely with families, local organizations and, especially, young people. From helping constituents who are navigating federal services to advancing priorities such as reducing the cost of living, my work this year has been grounded in service.Vague promise I constantly hear about the challenges facing youth, particularly mental health challenges. That is why I have been proud to support the building safer communities fund. Promise · 12 wordsIt will ensure people feel supported and that they are not alone. Claims · 20 wordsThis year, $1.25 million in federal funding will help nearly 250 young people gain real experience right in my community.3 Positioning · 22 wordsThis work has been guided by the leadership of the Prime Minister, whose vision continues to inspire us to deliver for Canadians.Positioning Claims · 5 wordsWe are one year in, Promise · 6 wordsand this is only the beginning.

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