Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Ginette Lavack

144 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
B–
73 / 100, held down by Signal
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Claims 40%Positioning 35%Thanks 17%Promise 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 58 wordsone year ago, I had the immense privilege of being elected to represent the people of Saint‑Boniface—Saint‑Vital, 1and it is my honour to do so to this day. Since then, we have advanced concrete priorities: Vague promisemore accessible housing, investments that support our businesses and create good jobs and measures to help families cope with the cost of living.Logical leap Positioning · 43 wordsWhat matters to me more than announcements and results is being present on the ground, listening to people and serving them. I see it as my job to help people navigate federal services and to speak on behalf of our community in Ottawa.Positioning Thanks · 24 wordsI would like to applaud the leadership of the right hon. Prime Minister, who is enabling us to deliver concrete results for our communities.Thanks Positioning · 8 wordsOne year in, we are just getting started.PositioningVague promise Promise · 11 wordsI remain deeply, enthusiastically and determinedly engaged in pursuing this work.

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