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Dominic LeBlanc

77 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Melissa Lantsman (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, red ink is flowing here in Liberal Ottawa, as the government puts the final touches on today’s fiscal update. The Prime Minister’s promise to spend less money quickly turned into a pledge to load up the taxpayer credit card and blow right past the limit. He could not even stay remotely close to the $31 billion left over by the last Liberal fiscal disaster. In fact, he actually doubled it. Will he end this costly credit card budgeting, cut spending or, at a minimum, cap the deficit at the already reckless $31 billion the last guy left behind?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 27%Claims 65%Procedure 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 21 wordswe certainly appreciate our colleague’s enthusiasm about the upcoming spring economic update. She paints a picture that is negative and inaccurate.Positioning Claims · 50 wordsThe good news is that in less than an hour, she will be enlightened by the good economic news, the effective spending controls our government has brought in and the investments we are making to build a truly competitive national economy, diversify our trading partners and build big once again.Partly on point Procedure · 6 wordsGood news is on the way.Procedure

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