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Marie-Gabrielle Ménard

98 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Joël Godin (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague is living in a world of make-believe. One day, the Liberal government will have to wake up and realize that ordinary Canadians are getting crushed by the cost of living. What is more, the seniors who built this country are struggling in their retirement. Our seniors aged 65 and over deserve the utmost respect. Will the Prime Minister stop strutting about on the international stage and running up the deficit and finally show seniors some respect by giving them hope?”
Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
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Thanks 21%Claims 57%Promise 21%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 21 wordsI have the great privilege of serving with some very dedicated colleagues on the Standing Committee on the Status of Women.Thanks Claims · 56 wordsWe are currently studying the vulnerability of senior women.1 What we are being told is that we need to continue to focus on the living conditions of seniors.Partly on point We have put various measures in place. My colleague mentioned the Canadian dental care plan. Senior women can receive direct support through this plan.2 There are other measures, Partly on pointPromise · 21 wordsbut what we are saying right now is that we remain committed to providing the best possible support to Canadian seniors.Vague promise

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