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Thanks 28%Claims 72%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 20 wordsI rise today to congratulate Ron Hallman on his retirement and thank him for his outstanding contribution to Parks Canada.ThanksClaims · 109 wordsRon has been leading this iconic institution with vision and rigour since 2019, 1and he has worked hard to protect and promote our natural and cultural heritage.He has held a number of important positions throughout his career in the public service, and he has always been driven by a deep commitment to Canadians.His leadership has contributed to reinforcing conservation, enabling reconciliation with indigenous peoples and bringing Canadians closer to nature.As president and CEO of Parks Canada, Ron Hallman has demonstrated outstanding leadership and dedication to public service.His work has helped to protect some of our country’s most treasured landscapes and historic sites for future generations.Thanks · 22 wordsOn behalf of all Canadians, I thank him, but also his family, for years of service and wish him a well-deserved retirement.Thanks