“Mr. Speaker, the Canadian Federation of Independent Business has noted that red tape alone is costing businesses $18 billion a year. Red tape and regulations are strangling Canadian businesses. I wonder if my colleague thinks that perhaps the Liberal government could introduce legislation to reduce some of this burdensome red tape rather than relying on the Senate to bring in a bill that has a relatively low impact on supporting businesses.”
Statement grade
B+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 82 / 100
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Thanks 19%Reasoning 5%The ask 76%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 20 wordsmy seasoned colleague has experience working in the House, debating on different committees and going through different pieces of legislation.ThanksReasoning · 5 wordsThat is a genuine concern.The ask · 79 wordsLet us get rid of red tape.Instead of building it, let us get rid of red tape and focus on the results.Vague promiseLet us make sure that the legislation that we pass does not burden the common Canadian with additional red tape.Vague promiseRather, let us focus on the results.Let us cut it short and focus on the results, so that Canadians can afford to pay their mortgages, buy a an affordable home and have an affordable life.