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Eric Lefebvre

57 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Xavier Barsalou-Duval (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, in yesterday’s economic update, the government announced that ordinary taxpayers will be able to contribute to this Canadian sovereign wealth fund that the Prime Minister wants to create. It so happens that his goal, as Prime Minister, is more or less to dictate what investments the sovereign wealth fund will cover. In fact, all of it will involve projects recommended by the Major Projects Office, and those projects will have been chosen by the Prime Minister’s Office. That means the Prime Minister is the one who will determine what investments will be made through the sovereign wealth fund. Does my colleague intend to invest his personal savings in the Prime Minister’s preferred picks?”
Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
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Aside 53%Reasoning 47%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 30 wordsunfortunately, I do not make the same kind of money our Prime Minister does.1Mockery My investments are far more modest. However, that is certainly not the choice I would make.Aside Reasoning · 27 wordsAs for Canadians, Conservatives naturally are in favour of freedom of choice, so I will leave it to Canadians to make their own choices regarding their investments.Partly on point

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