“Mr. Speaker, by doubling the deficit promised by the former prime minister, the Liberals are wasting money and racking up credit card debt for future generations, including the students from Richmond who are here on the Hill today. The Cúram scandal rears its ugly head once again in the economic update. The Liberals are adding half a billion dollars in cost overruns to the $5 billion in cost overruns already on the books. Every dollar squandered today means more debt for future generations. The Liberals have already spent $6.6 billion on a system that does not work. What is the Liberals’ credit card limit?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 77 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 18%Claims 71%Promise 12%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 5 wordslet us talk about jobs.ProcedureClaims · 36 wordsThe joint support ship project will create 3,100 jobs.1The River-class destroyers project will create 9,000 jobs.2The search and rescue aircraft project will create 1,800 jobs.3The logistics vehicle modernization project will create 1,600 jobs.4Partly on pointProcedure · 4 wordsThe list is long, ProcedurePromise · 6 wordsbut we are just getting started.Partly on pointVague promise