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David McGuinty

103 words · 4 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Vincent Ho (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, this week’s costly Liberal budget update confirms what Canadians already feel at the checkout. This costly credit card budget means more debt, more costs, more spending, more taxes and more of the same. Nothing has changed, because the Liberal Prime Minister is just another costly Liberal, and he has doubled Trudeau’s deficit. According to the latest “Canadian Food Sentiment Index” report, Canadians are now choosing food based on price, not nutrition, and they are cutting back just to survive. Nearly 10 million Canadians face food insecurity. How many more warning lights have to flash before the Liberals stop swiping the national credit card and finally make food more affordable for Canadians?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 24%Claims 71%Procedure 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordsI think they want more, so let us give them more.Positioning Claims · 73 wordsThere is 5 Wing Goose Bay, which is expected to create tens of thousands of jobs, with $8 billion; 1Bay du Nord, with thousands of jobs and $14 billion; 2Mersey River Wind project, with 200 construction jobs and $500 million; 3Nova Scotia and New Brunswick intertie, with 600 jobs and $6 billion; 4Port of Montreal’s Contrecoeur project, with 8,000 jobs and $1.2 billion; 5and Nouveau Monde Graphite, with 1,000 jobs and $1.8 billion.6Off point Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 5 wordsthis is a long list.Procedure Positioning · 14 wordsInstead of obstructing, the members can get on board and help us build Canada.PositioningOff point

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