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Abdelhaq Sari

67 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Bruce Fanjoy (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, I thank the member for Bourassa for his excellent speech and his very important bill. Can he talk about the stakeholders who have contributed to this bill?”
Statement grade
B+
83 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 27%Claims 25%Positioning 16%The ask 31%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 18 wordswith my remaining 25 seconds, I would like to start by thanking my colleague, the member for Carleton.Thanks Claims · 17 wordsYes, I met with several stakeholders, including Option consommateurs.1 People want to go further with this bill. Positioning · 11 wordsIt is great that people want to collaborate and work together.Positioning The ask · 21 wordsI encourage those people to participate in the study of the bill in committee in order to make the bill stronger.

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