Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Paul Connors

141 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 17 wordstoday I rise to honour the life and legacy of a remarkable community leader, Mr. Thomas Kieley.Procedure Claims · 108 wordsTom was a deeply respected member of our community. He dedicated his life to his community. His commitment touched every aspect of our town, from organizing the minor hockey associations to being a member of the Kiwanis Club and of the Knights of Columbus as grand knight, to name a few.1 Tom brought his leadership to municipal government as well. He served eight years as a councillor, including two as deputy mayor.4 Tom’s contributions were formally recognized when he was inducted as a builder in the Conception Bay South Sports Hall of Fame.2 He was also awarded the King Charles III Coronation Medal, honouring a lifetime of service.3 Positioning · 16 wordsTom Kieley’s leadership, integrity and unwavering dedication left a lasting mark on the town he loved.Positioning

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