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David McGuinty

207 words · 9 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to James Bezan (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is disgusting to see the government actually using closure to shut down debate on such a serious issue, sexual misconduct within the Canadian Armed Forces. It is disgusting that it is taking away the voice of veterans, of people who are surviving military sexual trauma, and not listening to the amendments being brought forward on Bill C-11. I do not know why the government is in a hurry on this. We brought it through committee in a relatively organized manner. We had cross-party support from the Bloc, the Conservatives and the NDP to make amendments based on the testimony we heard at committee, and now the government wants to ignore all that, shut down debate and use its sneaky majority to stifle democracy right here. Why is the minister ignoring veterans and survivors of military sexual trauma and not making sure they have a choice in what justice system they want to use, whether it is the military justice system or the civilian system?”
Statement grade
B–
72 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 7%Claims 71%Reasoning 14%Positioning 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordslet me begin by thanking my colleagues for being here to debate this important issue.Thanks Claims · 38 wordsI would remind the member across the floor that for 10 years Mr. Harper did nothing about this issue.1 The Conservatives did not bring a single proposed legislative amendment or change to the whole question of this regime.2Off point Reasoning · 28 wordsWhat we have decided is that delivering culture change is not only the right thing to do, Vague promisebut it is critical for our operational needs for national security. Positioning · 16 wordsIt is not a partisan issue, as hard as he would like to make it so.Positioning Claims · 110 wordsMy colleague does not recall that we introduced Bill C-11 to codify in law key recommendations from two distinguished judges of the Supreme Court, justices Arbour and Fish, 3and to rebuild victims’ and survivors’ trust in the Canadian Armed Forces.Partly on point Most importantly, Justice Arbour’s fifth recommendation calls for the removal of Canadian Armed Forces jurisdiction to investigate and prosecute Criminal Code sexual offences.4 Through Bill C-11, we would be implementing this recommendation exactly as we promised.5 What we heard from former Supreme Court justices Fish and Arbour, as well as from the chief of the defence staff, military justice experts, victims and survivors, is that these changes are long overdue.Partly on point

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