Replying to Maxime Blanchette-Joncas (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, Bill C-11 is a concrete example of the Liberal government’s lack of leadership. The Liberals have been in power for 10 years and, what is more, held a majority from 2015 to 2019. However, they waited for a public scandal before reforming the military justice system. Justice Arbour’s report showed that the system was failing to protect victims. I have a simple question for my colleague. Why did they wait for a public scandal before taking action?”
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A
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Positioning 25%Claims 65%Promise 10%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordsit is a question of opportunity.PositioningClaims · 45 wordsWe introduced the bill and reintroduced it in the House of Commons.1It went through the normal process, and it was Justice Arbour herself who predicted that it would take a few years to bring about fundamental changes.2That is exactly where we are now.Positioning · 11 wordsThe hon. member knows this; he is aware of the situation, PositioningPromise · 7 wordsand we hope to make progress today.Vague promise