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David McGuinty

Liberal on Military Justice System Modernization Act 2026-05-04

130 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Laila Goodridge (Conservative)

“Mr. Speaker, we are just over a week into the Liberals’ sneaky majority, which they got through backdoor deals, and this is the piece of legislation they have decided they are going to ram through and curtail debate. What is this piece of legislation we are talking about? This is a piece of legislation about sexual assault and listening to our veterans. The Liberals are choosing to put political expediency ahead of the needs of victims and our veterans or even listening to our military members. This is all par for the course. I have seen this in Cold Lake at 4 Wing. We still do not have an answer as to when we are going to get all 88 of the F-35s in, because they do not seem to care. This is just a pattern of abuse from the government of not putting veterans and our armed forces members first. The question is simple. Will the Liberals admit they are wrong on this and let the debate continue?”

Statement grade

B+

Average 84 / 100

A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.

Anecdote 7%Claims 62%Positioning 17%Reasoning 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 9 wordsI have had the chance to visit Cold Lake.¹Anecdote Claims · 14 wordsThe member has voted against every military investment, including $4 billion for that base.² Positioning · 5 wordsShe has had a chance.PositioningOff point Claims · 67 wordsBill C-11 would bolster trust in the military justice system by providing, as I said, legal clarity, as recommended by Justice Arbour.³ It would enhance the independence of key military justice actors, as recommended by former Justice Fish.⁴ For example, by elevating positions of key military justice actors to Governor in Council appointees, we would insulate them from real or perceived influence from the chain of command.⁵ Positioning · 17 wordsThe brave women and men of the Canadian Armed Forces are always there to keep Canada safe.PositioningOff point Reasoning · 18 wordsIt is our obligation, all of us in this House, to keep them safe from harassment and misconduct.

At a glance

Lost points for

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What the tags mean

Signal · 70

3 of 7 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

A story that illustrates instead of making a point.What the tags mean “I have had the chance to visit Cold Lake.”An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “She has had a chance.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “The brave women and men of the Canadian Armed Forces are always there to keep Canada safe.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · 64

4 of 7 deductions are Relevance

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the point put to the member, and the motion under debate.

Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate.What the tags mean “I have had the chance to visit Cold Lake.”About a personal visit to Cold Lake, not the motion or bill.
Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate.What the tags mean “The member has voted against every military investment, including $4 billion for that base.”About the member’s voting record on military spending, not the military justice bill or the time allocation motion.
Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate.What the tags mean “She has had a chance.”A remark about the member’s opportunities, not addressing the point put or the bill.
Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate.What the tags mean “The brave women and men of the Canadian Armed Forces are always there to keep Canada safe.”General praise of the armed forces, not the motion or the bill’s provisions.

Respect · 100

0 of 7 deductions are Respect

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Nothing lost points.

Clarity · 100

0 of 7 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Nothing lost points.

Claims · 5

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“I have had the chance to visit Cold Lake.”Hon. David McGuinty has visited Cold Lake.search
2“The member has voted against every military investment, including $4 billion for that base.”The member voted against every military investment, including $4 billion for that base.search
3“as recommended by Justice Arbour.”Bill C-11 is consistent with recommendations made by Justice Arbour.search
4“as recommended by former Justice Fish.”The enhancement of key military justice actors’ independence is consistent with recommendations made by former Justice Fish.search
5“by elevating positions of key military justice actors to Governor in Council appointees”Bill C-11 proposes elevating positions of key military justice actors to Governor in Council appointees.search

Analysed on 2026-10-20